This story... so
disapointing. That there's
only three chapters so far!! I'm hanging here
I love the idea of a sort of Romeo/Juliet concept. (Feuding families, etc.) Suki's fate was kind of sad, though. But I love the last line there on the first chapter, that was awesome!! I also obviously am a HUGE fan of the Kurosaki clan:-) And best of all so far was the exchange between Kin and the Shinigami King, that was Great!! Keep up the good work!!
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We sleep in this world. We awaken in the World Beyond. Unless the mysteries of death are no longer feared, one can never achieve Bankai.
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Blade of Fate in the Artist's Haven section!! And be sure to check out all the other great stories and art presented there!!
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