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03-11-2008, 05:30 AM
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   |  baku kaminari baku kaminari.jpg what do yall think of kami? (click on her for a bigger photo) thats her name there on her outfit and it means "lightning blast"
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03-11-2008, 06:13 AM
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|  Let's see.... It definitely seems original and creative! I love the outfit and how the dress is floating up. It also has a degree of movement and tension as the viewer worries if Kami will fall or not lol You have all the right beginnings!  However, her feet are too small and the leg on the right side is very awkward. If you moved it slightly more to the right and made it larger, especially if you make the other foot larger, then it will look more natural. Make sure that this foot is bigger than the other one since it is closer to the viewer. Her the arm on her left is very nicely done, as is that hand. The arm on the right is too short. The upper arm is about the right size, but the forearm is slightly longer and generally thinner than the upper arm. Also, the hand needs to be larger. In real life, the hand should be about the size of a face. Since this is anime style, the hand should be slightly smaller than the face in girls. Imagine the other hand opened up. That would be perfect!Other than that, it's very nice and clever and I LOVE all the details! This must've taken a lot of time!! Sorry, if my critiques are annoying, but I feel that your personal growth and improvement depends on them. Rin-chan
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03-11-2008, 06:20 AM
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| lmao, no worries, im a fan of critique. ^.^ thx lol ya it took a while, and when i do something like this its a sit-down project, not a quick sketch like usual... spring break is next week so ill have time to do a new and better one ^.^ (hopefully!!) i have tons of sketches, but most are not so detailed; mostly just pose experimentation
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03-11-2008, 06:27 AM
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| I'm definitely going to look forward to future drawings!! You should look into figure drawing. It really helps you learn foreshortening quickly as well as understanding the body. Good models will give you really dyanmic and interesting poses to try and draw. It's really fun and usually pretty cheap! Rin-chan
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03-11-2008, 06:32 AM
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| hahahaa ya, some times ill ask my friends to stand a certain way so i can sketch their arms/whatever... it can be quite hilariuous at times ^.^ (and they call me gullible) ^.^
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03-11-2008, 06:38 AM
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| lol Yeah, friends are good, but I was referring to nude models. These people are professionals and it's actually not as gross as you think. I used to use my friends a lot. Now, after drawing the nudes, I don't really need them. It's so much easier to see body lines and exactly how the body is moving without all the clothes. Actually, the guy ones are just awkward... But you don't have to draw that part if you don't want to lol Rin-chan
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03-11-2008, 11:47 PM
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hmmm that actually makes a lot of sense lmao
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03-18-2008, 08:20 AM
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03-18-2008, 08:50 AM
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I said that here, too: My Drawings Why? Rin-chan
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