[vampirequeen101]

hey ya'll almost done with the semester won't be able to post for a couple weeks. i am working on a new story too.

[vampirequeen101]

hey i was wondering if anyone wanted to help me get ideas for this story!!! i like it but am at a dead end.

[WolvenLordSoulReaper]

This story... so disapointing. That there's only three chapters so far!! I'm hanging here I love the idea of a sort of Romeo/Juliet concept. (Feuding families, etc.) Suki's fate was kind of sad, though. But I love the last line there on the first chapter, that was awesome!! I also obviously am a HUGE fan of the Kurosaki clan:-) And best of all so far was the exchange between Kin and the Shinigami King, that was Great!! Keep up the good work!!

[vampirequeen101]

i'm going to work on it soon. i just need to pick it back up sometime but i have about 6 stories being worked on right now.

[WolvenLordSoulReaper]

Some would call that ambitious overachievement

[vampirequeen101]

i call it how my brain works i usually come up with several different ideas a week. most often people can find me typing on my computer.

[vampirequeen101]

if you go back to the last chapter i added some more work.

[WolvenLordSoulReaper]

Cool. I also forgot to mention that I was reading your next-gen stories and the skills of your writing are considerably refined from those earlier stories. You see the basic underlying style which I mentioned I was so fond of before, but it seems more structured in execution. Your writing style has always been unique (a good thing, I'm tired of mainstream novels which all sound like they're written by robots, that's one of the reasons I like Christian author Ted Dekker so much, his writing style is unique), but now it seems more polished. Keep up the GREAT WORK!!

[vampirequeen101]

thank you i have been working on my stories since i was sixteen and the stories from this year are some of my favorite ones. personally i like the author rene gutteridge her boo series is hilarious. the above author and robin jones gunn are the ones that inspired me to start writing. my ideas are based on my own personality though.(both are christian authors)

[vampirequeen101]

Lee: maybe but if i die you go too my dearest kin.Kin: now why would i let you kill me? do you think i'm an idiot? Lee: no i just think i know better about how to double cross. Kin: but keiji why would you?(she can't finish since he stabbed her in the heart) Young: i'm quite sure this won't take long my love.(he leaves no survivors) Kin wake up my love for we have to leave tokyo now to go to soul society. you will be healed there and then we can wed.Kin: i'm sorry the task fell to you Young i never wanted to die yet.please forgive me i was betrayed. Young: they did me a favor actually now i can show you how a shinigami really works in this world.they will end up as hollows i'm sure but then i can kill them twice. you'll be able to meet many shinigami including the representitive.he decided to come for a visit he lives in the town we must now protect.i believe the name of the town is kanakura town but i'm not sure.Kin: it doesn't matter we can't be seperated now.(they arrive in soul society) Hantaro: oh young you're back and with lady kin!!! the commander wants to see the both of you and then byaukaya will take you to the gate for kanakura town.Young:thanks hanataro.Kin: does that mean your LT. and squad is coming with you??? Young: most likely. why? Kin: aren't those two crazy guys on your sqaud? oh dear what were their names? Young: you mean ryu and taejo? Kin: yes those two! they scare me half to death with the way they use their shikai....plus they look a little eccentric.Young; the only one i worry about is taejo and thats because he seems distant of late. at least ever since i chose to gaurd you. Kin: i remember him from when he was alive, he was always trying to get his gang to hurt me but i never let them have the chance.ryu though was always trying to protect me along with keiji and i never thought they too would become shinigami.i wonder do they remember? Young: i have arranged for you to stay with kenpachi and squad eleven until our wedding. don't worry about anything. Kin: he told me not to worry yet here i am alone once again . just weeks after he said that he was killed by a menos grande. i was left to take his place as ruler of soul society and now i have come to live in the shinigami representitive's town. i look forward to see the powers that come forth from their strong will.