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| queen of shadowed plains. Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: liberty university
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| It was a cold night when the traditional dances started and I was to lead the dances. We were preparing for our next attack and needed to lift our spirits. It is especially trying in battle for us considering we are vampires and are constantly hunted by Ikoto clan members. The Ikoto are constantly trying to kill me because I am the teragura nightshade. We have ruled Tokyo Japan for over a century and I recently took the leadership of the family. Living in modern day feels odd to most vampires but I’m only eighteen so I guess I’m used to it. I mean I didn’t have to shift between old and modern day languages. Being the nightshade has taught me the importance of the older generations though since they have been through everything imaginable they know a whole lot more than I do about things. I just wish that I wasn’t hunted because of what I am; I just want peace between the vampiric race and the humans. Forgive me for saying it but I wish that everyone would just go away sometimes so I can breathe without thinking it might be my last. I miss the days as a kid when I didn’t realize what was happening around me. Those days have long since passed and now I need to stop the Ikoto from annihilating the vampiric race before the next full moon when we are weakest. Somehow I get the feeling though that this might be resolved in another way than what was previously thought. Recently I have had a dream where I’m sitting in a long flowing white dress and there is a young man with silver eyes and hair the color of the jet necklace I was wearing. He called out my name and touched my silken white hair and then disappeared into a mist. After I woke up crying several times my grandmother came and asked me what was wrong but all I could say was I don’t know because I realized that the man with silver eyes was Ryu Ikoto leader of the Ikoto clan. All I could think about was why he could be calling my name when we were supposed to be enemies. hey ya'll this is just a teaser or better how far i am in writing this story![]()
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| queen of shadowed plains. Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: liberty university
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| Attachment 102 hey here is the people i have started to base the looks on ryu is the first one and matsu is the other one. i'll leaving you guessing as to who these people actually are!!!!
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| queen of shadowed plains. Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: liberty university
Posts: 655
| It was a cold night when the traditional dances started and I was to lead the dances. We were preparing for our next attack and needed to lift our spirits. It is especially trying in battle for us considering we are vampires and are constantly hunted by Ikoto clan members. The Ikoto are constantly trying to kill me because I am the teragura nightshade. We have ruled Tokyo Japan for over a century and I recently took the leadership of the family. Living in modern day feels odd to most vampires but I’m only eighteen so I guess I’m used to it. I mean I didn’t have to shift between old and modern day languages. Being the nightshade has taught me the importance of the older generations though since they have been through everything imaginable they know a whole lot more than I do about things. I just wish that I wasn’t hunted because of what I am; I just want peace between the vampiric race and the humans. Forgive me for saying it but I wish that everyone would just go away sometimes so I can breathe without thinking it might be my last. I miss the days as a kid when I didn’t realize what was happening around me. Those days have long since passed and now I need to stop the Ikoto from annihilating the vampiric race before the next full moon when we are weakest. Somehow I get the feeling though that this might be resolved in another way than what was previously thought. Recently I have had a dream where I’m sitting in a long flowing white dress and there is a young man with silver eyes and hair the color of the jet necklace I was wearing. He called out my name and touched my silken white hair and then disappeared into a mist. After I woke up crying several times my grandmother came and asked me what was wrong but all I could say was I don’t know because I realized that the man with silver eyes was Ryu Ikoto leader of the Ikoto clan. All I could think about was why he could be calling my name when we were supposed to be enemies. Every time he called I felt a stirring in me almost as if he is reached into my heart and pulled out the deepest feelings of unrest and pain that I had. I sensed that the feeling isn’t meant to harm but actually to take the burden upon him in place of my heart bearing the brunt. Soon enough I started to realize that in my dreams he was crying over me. Eventually I realized that he was mourning over the fact that I’m a vampire and all I could do was join in but in my dreams when I joined in he started to look into my eyes as if something was new. No, not new, stirring and then one night in my dream he ran away into the mist but when I tried to follow I saw that I was chained to the floor. It was then in that horrible nightmare that I was murdered by the Ikoto clan and when I awoke my grandmother insisted that I tell her what happened. I told her everything and she burst into tears screaming at the top of her lungs "my child do not take the path to this nightmare". I walked over to a window and all I could say was my path is clear for I was chosen by this clan as the retribution for the deaths of many. I am the only one ever to be sent to the Ikoto clan by the elders and I am to be a bride to their leader. My grandmother told me that if I went that the dream would come true and all I could say was retribution must be counted to them. In case you didn’t know my name is Suki Kaiyo and I am destined to be the last teragura nightshade.
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| Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: St. Louis, MO
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| Cool. Vampires and love. Good plotline so far!
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| yeah, this story is gonna be hot! keep it coming! ![]()
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| queen of shadowed plains. Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: liberty university
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| thanks i'll probably work on it like thursday. i have less stuff to do than.yeah vampires are my fave subject for storylines and i still have to introduce matsu.(eek) he will be a vampire but don't jump to any conclusions.i won't allow it, my stories are too random.
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| I L-O-V-E it the story i awesome i can't wait to see the next chapter
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| queen of shadowed plains. Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: liberty university
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| thank you i don't know when i'll release the next chapter. what do you guys think about the people i used as model for the male characters? i actually got them off of wikipedia from a fan section.
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| queen of shadowed plains. Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: liberty university
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| I was only recently informed of my fate formally but I have known for years. I leave soon for the Ikoto clan’s family house and it is painful being prepared for this fate of mine. I am shunned yet primped for a fate I don’t want. I am made beautiful yet I am dead and bitter inside. In the eighteen years I have been alive never did I expect to leave in this manner. People who I have known for years do not speak to me and I see only a few crying. I am the head of this clan and yet all forsake me because of the accursed promise my ancestor made to them. My dear friend Matsu is the only one who seeks to protect me but I do not want him trying to do that because he will die I can sense it. He is the head of the Kurosaki vampire clan and he wanted me to be his bride but this promise has broken that into a thousand pieces on the floor. (Flashback)Suki: Matsu what are you doing here at this late hour? Matsu: I will die by your side if I have to but do not forsake me as they forsake you. Suki: what makes you think that I would my dear old friend? Matsu: I hate it when you call me old. I’m only a hundred and you will reach that soon enough. Suki: I won’t reach that age remember. Forget me forever Matsu it will cause you less pain. Matsu: I’m planning on a raid soon. (End of flashback) I had been in that house a week when they killed some of the vampires from the raid. My dear Matsu among them as he was dying he cried out my name and asked me to never forget him. I couldn’t promise that even if I wanted to because I would have no time for that. Life is hard enough but I have double the hateful stares because I have stolen two men from the places they were. My new husband Ryu Ikoto and my dearest friend Matsu there are worse things they hate me for as well. They hate me because they cannot kill me for now I carry the heir to two families within me. Her name will be Kin Nariko though if I die I do not know how she will survive this uphill battle she will face. I know that she is going to be strong like her father who I have already given my heart to but she will also be vampiric like me and her burden will be great.
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| well, this is definetly the best chapter..post... so far...haha, i love the creative writing! keep it coming!
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