[krngrlX3]

Ok in this contest, your supposed to think of a romantic event in Gakuen Alice!!!
Rules:
No sexual/bad stuffs or swearing
Make it as romantic as you can
No copying from the original Gakuen Alice chapters or from other people
And it can be in any time zone in gakuen alice

You have to post your romantic story before July 20.
On July 20, I will post up another thread so that people can vote for the winner of the contest!!! It will be called: voting for the winner!!!! The voting will stop on July 25

Ok, here’s my story…
It’s almost winter time(end of fall) and Mikan is feeling really depressed because Hotaru has to once more go away because of her Alice. So she is in the woods and she hugs a tree(lol?) thinking it as Hotaru. Ruka comes by and he sees Mikan. At first he thinks: nani? But as he gets closer he sees that she is crying. So he pulls her off the tree and hugs her tightly! At first, Mikan is confused, but she is too depreesed so she didn’t really care. After like 10 minutes or so, he says he has to go and she tries to smile. “Thank you,” said Mikan. He smiles back and they depart. Mikan is still depressed though so she walks to the back of her and Natsume’s house and she kneels down and cries, hanging her head down. She is thinking thoughts like: maybe this is good for Hotaru, I’m always a burden to her…I should leave her alone, especially because of all she’s done for me… Meanwhile, Natsume is reading his comic book and he happens to pass by Mikan. As usual, he said, “Stop crying. Crybaby. Baka. You’re really loud. Shutup,” Mikan looked up and just hung her head, wiping her tears but still crying. “She usually isn’t like this,” he thought. So he sat down next to her and put his head on her lap and smiled, (he started smiling a lot ever since they escaped from the academy.) “What’s wrong Mikan?” he asked. “It’s freezing out here, let’s go inside,” he said. She shook her head slightly and buried her face into her arms. Natsume smiled, “I guess I’ll have to do it the hard way,” he said. He scooped her up into his arms and kissed her on the lips. She giggled a little and hugged his head. “Thank you,” she said. “Natsume’s the one who always cheers me up,” she thought. They both sat on their bed and after a few moments of silence, he asked, “So…what were you so sad about anyway?”
“Hotaru is going to go away for a year,” she sighed.
“Well, she is still coming back, so you don’t need to wail out your eyes,” he replied.
“But, I miss her,” she whimpered.
“Mikan, sometimes you have to let things go,” he said kindly.
She broke into sobs and he hugged her as tight as Ruka did. She smiled and was about to kiss his cheek but he turned his head so she kissed him on the lips…for a long time…and by then the first snowflake gently dropped to the ground as thousands more followed it’s path…


Epilogue: they made snowmen/women of Hotaru and Ruka…xDDDD[/size]

[krngrlX3]

aahh!!!! >.< I'm really bad at fanfictions so sorry!!!!!! excuse myself!!!!

[seeliespright]

Moved to Otaku Talk where this belongs

Also, don't double-post your threads. I've deleted the other, and next time will be a ban.

[sakura1x1sasukelove]

ummm....what to write...(who I'm i kidding! i have been thinking about this for weaks i have the story in my head!!!) hehe....ok hear comes my evil writeing!!! MWHAHAH

let's start!!! YAY

WARING: THERE IS SOME FAKE SMEXY STUFF (NOTHING REAL) BUT THERE ARE SOME BAD WORD IN IT YOU HAVE BEEN WORNED)

I sighed, I was so tiered of being sad. Ever since she left I was sad, I told people to stay away from me for there own good so I wont show them what you have seen for years. Dependence. My weakness I have tried and tried. Why is it so hard!? Why cant I learn!? Am I defective!? My hart cant handle this, but if I come running to you now I don’t know when I can escape the pain of your love. It’s so hard to understand, but for some reason, I’m happy I met you. You have shone me a light that I love and yet hate.

I have to move on! She wont be back for 2 years I have to stop the pain. I keep telling myself this, why wont it stop!? I am so tired, I’m going insane! I need it to stop, now! If not, I don’t know how long I can keep this life. I have been sick ever since she left. I keep clasping, I fell deep in to sleep for days people keep coming to my side but one by one they leave I’m down to 10 people. Less people to hurt, or be hurt by.

Then all the sudden the roof tile I was sitting on gave way and I fell to the gutter. “hey are you ok?!” I hear “him” on the other side of the roof. Damit he heard me. I thought with that I left the night sky and climbed in to my window to the “no star” room of the middle school dorms. I just started this year. Yep that’s me the depress middle scholar. People avoided me ever since I entered middle school with out, her.

But some till saw hope in me. And there they are out side on the roof , I bet they thought they could trap me and make me talk. Nope. Whenever I’m in class or out side I walk away fast or go out cold in the hall way. They bring me to the nurse and wait. But if I do wake-up I never open my eyes after I do. I wait, and I hear if there’s life in the room. If someone’s still in there I keep my eyes shut.

Sometimes there’s someone in the room being quiet, so I open my eyes and I get greeted with ‘are you ok?’ and ‘why wont you speak any more!?’. But most of the time they just hug me and stuff. I hated that the most, because then I cant walk away. I have to stay and make them let go, but , god damit, my eyes expose me every time, one look in my eyes you can tell I want to talk to people, be happy, I want them to stay with me and never let go. But I do other wise and walk away I wonder if that’s why people watch over me?

Any way, back to now. Natsume is knocking at my window, asking me pointless questions. I thought natsume of all people would understand I wanted to be alone. I got fed up, my rope snapped, my button was pushed to hard. I slammed open the windows grabbed his caller, and yelled as hard as I could in his face “WHY ARE YOU HERE, STOP IT!!” every one must of heard me, I don’t know why but that felt good. The look on his face was priceless. He looked like he just saw a murder in action.


Well I guess it sounded like a threat with my cold voce. I have not said anything in 1 and ½ years. It’s nice to know it still woks. I pulled him into my room and shut this windows and sighed. I sit on my desk chare arms folded across my chest. Waiting, waiting for the horrible questions that lay ahead. instead he just stared at me, confused. Damit! I bet he saw my eyes I thought I shut them. I waited for a little longer, still just staring wide eyed. I crossed my legs, I fidgeted. How long is this punk going to stare at me? I thought. I sighed I was tired of waiting so I decided to start the hell of questions.

“How long are you going to stare at me Natsume?” he just blinked. Sitting on my bed like a fool.
“God, Natsume I am finally ready to talk and you just look at me!” I went off again.
This time he stat up straight and returned his eyes to normal. “Well” I said. He sighed, then started to laugh.
“Why are you laughing at anger man!?” I said, I felt like I was the one asking everything. He suddenly stopped and stared again. This time walking forwards to me. I roll back, “hey stay away anger boy” I told him, he didn’t stop.

I rolled back as far as I could till I hit a wall. I still had my arms and legs crossed but I was staring at him like he was crazy. He kept walking to me closer and closer till we were inches away face to face. The door was two feet away. To far I could not reach. “why did you shut your self off from the word, why didn’t you talk, why don’t you go to the hospital, why did you leave all the people that cared for you? Why now, why not sooner?” one after the other it’s really is hell. “One at a time.” I said trying to roll closer to the door, he slammed his hands on both sides of my head. I’m not going anywhere fast.

“Answer or your not going any were.” he said in a loud voce. I stared at him with my best “get the hell away from me or you will die” look. Till I herd whispering, there must have been 15 people at the most were out side my door ease dropping. Then I get an evil Idea, it will get me out in 3 seconds flat. “natsume what are you doing!?…stop…no…not there…please stop….natsume no!….stop it…it hurts…stop!…” one Mississippi. Oh I can hear it now, natsume must of herd it by now to. The whispering I cant understand yet but we will get here.

“Wait…no…stop…it hurts!….please no….stop it…not there…urge” two Mississippi. Grr come on people how long do I have to keep this up, but it’s worth it I can hear them now, they want to get another teacher. Wait. There’s a teacher here already, when why won they come in!? psh psh , shame, shame. They should hurry up before a become Prego!! Ok will this should do it one more for the team! Oh, keep in mind natsume is in my face looking as confused as ever, but I think he’s starting to under stand why I’m doing this. Shit got to hurry! One more time!

“natsume no…I said no!…it hurts…IT HURTS!…YOUR GOING TO BRAKE ME!” three Mississippi. With that it clicks in natsume mind what I’m doing, he jumps back. At the same time 2 teachers 5 people in 8 grade and 8 people in my grade come though the door. Bingo I’m free.

I run to the window and open it. And start to clime out, I turn back to look at them there all staring at me. I cant see who they are it’s to dark. I have to finish of this with some long awaited fun. “thanks you were a big help in getting him off my back with questions. If you want answers come get me.” with that I’m off in the trees with a jump. Oh god, I regret that. Now there going to be after me and I still feel half dead and if I don’t find a place to hide soon. And the lord knows Natsume is going to want revenge. I keep jumping though the trees, hey, what do you think I was doing when “she” was not here, reading? Nope. I was running mostly away form people. But who cares.

Any way I can hear people yelling after me. I know it wont be long before people find out were I am and use there alice. I know I have gotten on very ones nerves, this is there chance. Then it hit me like a stone cold brick, bear! I will hide in his cabin! Me and bear have gotten go be go good friends. Were do you think I ended up running to? I will let you answer that. I bet he will be glad to see me talking, and it’s been a wile. So I hopped over to bears house.

When I got there I was so tired huffing and till in the trees, I wont be caught that fast. I look over and I see a pile of students next to bear. I hop out of the tree and try to act as cool as possible till I get inside. “hey bear.” I said walking torts the door. “lets go inside ok?” I ask. He looks over to me and he looks uneasy, I wonder what’s wrong with him. I walk over to him and crouch down. He looks up to me with that uneasy face. He says some thing in bear language. I kinda under stand some thing like ‘no, students, cabin’ that’s all I needed to know. I whisper thank you to bear and tell him I will be back for him. I get up “oh ok then I under stand.” I said winking.

With that I run off. dam them! They got the teleporters and mindreadrs! Ok I have to find some were else. I hop along going to tree to tree. I cant keep this up much longer. I have to stop here and hide. I jump down in to a bush and hide. But it’s small so I have to lay down. I laided on my back so I could see the stars. it’s kinda hard but whatever. I can hear there getting closer. All I can do now is pray. And hide. I know it wont work but if I some how get my alice to stop there’s , there’s a light of hope.

Just before I went out cold, I wondered what day it was. With that a single snow flake fell on my nose. Ahh…I see. Then I was in the dark alone, on Christmas….

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[krngrlX3]

sorry!!! >< like I thought there was somthing wrong and my thread wasn't posted so umms I reposted it and saw that it was posted!!!! I'm really sorry!!!!

[krngrlX3]

:'D so TT^TT beautiful!!!!!