[momicchi]

does anyone have any good furuba fanfics?

edit: here's a link to my fanfiction.net page...i barely made it, so there's probably a bunch of things that're messed up. so far, i've uploaded the stories that i wrote on mf...

[r_ella]

wow... nice "one-shot" (for me, I think...) fanfic... good job, momicchi-san...

[momicchi]

here's a kyoru fanfic...it takes place the day after tohru saw kyo's true form.
[slightly inspired by tamaki and haruhi's feelings in ouran high school host club]
i tried to make it romantic...hope you like it! [it has more action and less speech, and it's more serious than my other one]


tohru sat on her bed, thinking about the day before. kyo's true form...
she glanced at the mirror hanging on the wall. the girl she saw seemed...different, somewhat than the girl she saw a few days ago. tohru closed her eyes. images of kyo's true form filled her mind. her heart began to beat profusely. she quickly opened her eyes.
"am i...afraid?" she thought. she closed her eyes again. this time, she saw another form of kyo- his human form. the form he had when they first met. the shy, awkward kyo that talked to her...that joked with her...that protected her...that opened up to her.
"no. i'm not afraid. it isn't fear. but then...what is this feeling?" she thought.

there was a light knock on the door.
"oh!" exclaimed tohru as her eyes snapped open, "c-come in."
a familiar head of orange hair poked in through the doorway. it was kyo.
"kyo?...what is it?..." tohru inquired.
"are you ok?" he asked, looking down at the floor and averting her gaze.
"of course i am! what made you ask that?" tohru put on a smile. why, why was her heart beating so fast? and why did she suddenly feel so nervous?
"you don't have to pretend," said kyo, "i know you said you'd stay with me, but...well, you saw my true form. i'm a monster. you're afraid aren't you?" he looked at tohru with a face full of angst and sadness. tohru felt like she was about to cry. seeing kyo like this...she couldn't stand it.
"no...no! you're not a monster, and i'm not afraid! don't you remember? how you used to walk me home, and how you made me soup when i was sick? you cared for me! would a monster do that?..." teardrops began to form in her eyes.
kyo was silent. tohru walked over to him and took his hand.
"come on"
"w-what are you doing?" kyo asked in surprise.
"just follow me", she whispered.

tohru led kyo outside of the house, to the ladder that led up to the rooftop.
"the roof?..." said kyo, hesitantly.
tohru nodded, and began to climb. kyo followed. tohru was still nervous; her heart hadn't slowed down.
"i better hurry up", she thought. as tohru ascended the ladder, her foot suddenly slipped. she braced herself for a fall, but kyo caught her. she looked down at him, and they both blushed. tohru resumed climbing.

when they reached the rooftop, tohru and kyo sat down and began to gaze at the stars.
"do you remember the first time we sat here together?" tohru asked.
"yeah...", said kyo, with a small smile, "you tried to punch me with a...'right straight', was it?" he imitated tohru's feeble punch. they both laughed.
"that day...it was really important to me" said tohru.
kyo glanced at her.
"she looks beautiful in the moonlight", he thought.
"it was the first time that you really opened up to me, kyo"
tohru looked at kyo, and their eyes met. neither of them looked away.
"i-i was glad to have someone to talk to...it's not like i didn't want to open up, i just..."
kyo looked back up at the sky, blushing. tohru didn't have to hear him say it; she understood. his face said it all. as she looked at kyo, she understood everything else, too. her heartbeats, her nervousness when she thought of him, her inablility to see his sadness, and the happiness that she felt when she saw his smile.
"kyo..."
"yeah?"
"i...i love you."
kyo stared. he looked at tohru, as if seeing her for the first time. he touched her cheek, then gently carressed her lips with his. their first kiss...
"i love you, too" he whispered.
they kissed again, their hearts beating at the same pace.

[TheRandomChocolate]

Gosh, I haven't had time to read your first fanfic but your second one is awesome! Hardly any grammar or spelling mistakes too O.o I love it! XD

[momicchi]

thanks to both ella-chan and choco-chan ^_^

yeah i'm a spell-check freak...i hate mispelling, but i get a lot of typos when i try to type fast, so i have to edit my posts a lot...

[momicchi]

i thought "heartbeat" was missing something, so i decided to write this short continuation [sort of like an epilogue]...i don't know if the fanfic is better with or without it...i piled on a lot of romance, so i hope it isn't too cheesy...well anyway, enjoy ^_^

kyo was surprised at himself.
"i just kissed her...twice!" he thought, "a-am i perverted?" he turned away from tohru, his cheeks a deep shade of red. tohru was so happy...her heart was pumping, and she was breathless. a tear rolled down her cheeks. kyo turned to face her.
"oh crap, you're crying! why are you crying?! i was being a pervert, wasn't i?...look, i'm--" kyo was cut short as tohru threw her arms around him.
"i'm just so happy to be with you..." she cried.
kyo smiled, and wiped her tear away. he put his arm around her shoulder, and pulled her close to him.
"then stop crying. i want you to smile."
tohru looked at kyo. her heart skipped a beat. kyo was acting...different, but she wasn't about to complain. she grinned and laid her head on his shoulder. they both looked up at the sky, as a shooting star flashed by.
"kyo, let's make a wish...but don't say it out loud, or it won't come true!"
"all right", kyo laughed.

"i wish--"
"i wish--"
that we could stay like this...forvever...

[ShojoLuver]

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!

[hayate_dnangel_lover]

you r sooo good at that fanfic awwwwwwwww its sooo cute i love kyo too bye the way wouldn't he tranform into the cat when she put her arms around him XD lol get fanfic do more like with kyo & yuki or somthing with a lil romance in them those fancis are awsome!!

[momicchi]

arigato! ^_^
but i tend to get a little...awkward when trying to write yaoi, so kyoxyuki would be a little...*ahem*
well, i disregarded the transformation to make the scene more romantic...
let's just pretend that kyo transformed after the end of the fanfic >_<

[loly 3asal]

momi-chan ur AWESOME ..
i've read it all but this one is the BEEEEEST
i've alwayz wanted something like this to happend u make my dream come true

Originally Posted by momicchi

here's a kyoru fanfic...it takes place the day after tohru saw kyo's true form.
[slightly inspired by tamaki and haruhi's feelings in ouran high school host club]
i tried to make it romantic...hope you like it! [it has more action and less speech, and it's more serious than my other one]


tohru sat on her bed, thinking about the day before. kyo's true form...
she glanced at the mirror hanging on the wall. the girl she saw seemed...different, somewhat than the girl she saw a few days ago. tohru closed her eyes. images of kyo's true form filled her mind. her heart began to beat profusely. she quickly opened her eyes.
"am i...afraid?" she thought. she closed her eyes again. this time, she saw another form of kyo- his human form. the form he had when they first met. the shy, awkward kyo that talked to her...that joked with her...that protected her...that opened up to her.
"no. i'm not afraid. it isn't fear. but then...what is this feeling?" she thought.

there was a light knock on the door.
"oh!" exclaimed tohru as her eyes snapped open, "c-come in."
a familiar head of orange hair poked in through the doorway. it was kyo.
"kyo?...what is it?..." tohru inquired.
"are you ok?" he asked, looking down at the floor and averting her gaze.
"of course i am! what made you ask that?" tohru put on a smile. why, why was her heart beating so fast? and why did she suddenly feel so nervous?
"you don't have to pretend," said kyo, "i know you said you'd stay with me, but...well, you saw my true form. i'm a monster. you're afraid aren't you?" he looked at tohru with a face full of angst and sadness. tohru felt like she was about to cry. seeing kyo like this...she couldn't stand it.
"no...no! you're not a monster, and i'm not afraid! don't you remember? how you used to walk me home, and how you made me soup when i was sick? you cared for me! would a monster do that?..." teardrops began to form in her eyes.
kyo was silent. tohru walked over to him and took his hand.
"come on"
"w-what are you doing?" kyo asked in surprise.
"just follow me", she whispered.

tohru led kyo outside of the house, to the ladder that led up to the rooftop.
"the roof?..." said kyo, hesitantly.
tohru nodded, and began to climb. kyo followed. tohru was still nervous; her heart hadn't slowed down.
"i better hurry up", she thought. as tohru ascended the ladder, her foot suddenly slipped. she braced herself for a fall, but kyo caught her. she looked down at him, and they both blushed. tohru resumed climbing.

when they reached the rooftop, tohru and kyo sat down and began to gaze at the stars.
"do you remember the first time we sat here together?" tohru asked.
"yeah...", said kyo, with a small smile, "you tried to punch me with a...'right straight', was it?" he imitated tohru's feeble punch. they both laughed.
"that day...it was really important to me" said tohru.
kyo glanced at her.
"she looks beautiful in the moonlight", he thought.
"it was the first time that you really opened up to me, kyo"
tohru looked at kyo, and their eyes met. neither of them looked away.
"i-i was glad to have someone to talk to...it's not like i didn't want to open up, i just..."
kyo looked back up at the sky, blushing. tohru didn't have to hear him say it; she understood. his face said it all. as she looked at kyo, she understood everything else, too. her heartbeats, her nervousness when she thought of him, her inablility to see his sadness, and the happiness that she felt when she saw his smile.
"kyo..."
"yeah?"
"i...i love you."
kyo stared. he looked at tohru, as if seeing her for the first time. he touched her cheek, then gently carressed her lips with his. their first kiss...
"i love you, too" he whispered.
they kissed again, their hearts beating at the same pace.

kyo was surprised at himself.
"i just kissed her...twice!" he thought, "a-am i perverted?" he turned away from tohru, his cheeks a deep shade of red. tohru was so happy...her heart was pumping, and she was breathless. a tear rolled down her cheeks. kyo turned to face her.
"oh crap, you're crying! why are you crying?! i was being a pervert, wasn't i?...look, i'm--" kyo was cut short as tohru threw her arms around him.
"i'm just so happy to be with you..." she cried.
kyo smiled, and wiped her tear away. he put his arm around her shoulder, and pulled her close to him.
"then stop crying. i want you to smile."
tohru looked at kyo. her heart skipped a beat. kyo was acting...different, but she wasn't about to complain. she grinned and laid her head on his shoulder. they both looked up at the sky, as a shooting star flashed by.
"kyo, let's make a wish...but don't say it out loud, or it won't come true!"
"all right", kyo laughed.

"i wish--"
"i wish--"
[i]that we could stay like this...forvever...